Lady Pirate

Yes, you should develop you characters. I want to know who she was marrying and why it was important. I want to feel the knights tormoil over what he's doing, ...

Poem has been taken down for MAJOR reconstructive writing. Thank you for the Intrest! Lady Pirate

I say BOY, becuase, (If I remember you Unicorn, Virgin post correctly) then the Baby can be a Unicorn, (And possibly a man) BOY!!!

Sweet, I am so O.R.S. now. (for those of you who don't speak Lady Pirate, O.R.S. is Outrageously Rightchously Stoked)

you're welcome....

Yes, you should, trust me, when I first started sending off to publishers, I terrified, and you know where to find me, if you need me, my french buddy!

Oui, I agree with Siegfried! Anytime you want to talk...

I won't laugh.... swear!

Welcome to YWS, to both, Shawn and Sanguine_dreams... enjoy the site

Besides reading and writing.... Soccer, I love soccer. I play it, I coach little kids, I ref, I line, I watch it. I love soccer, I've been playing for 11 ...

Salut! I know what your saying, NM, but no writer writes the same way. I write one way, which you know, and then you write another. If Anne McCaffrey had ...

Question in Poems... hmm.... I think my work generally really well, but I also think that it depends on the poem. Becuase there are some poems that you just don't ...

It is not my famiy that would have a problem with it, in fact my Aunt helps me edit, beucase weary eyes miss alot. My sister too, and my mom. ...

To me and the book and the movie bring two differnt things to the table. The movie consentrates on the events for towards the end of the book, if I ...

I loved this book was very good, the fast pace, the quick and witty writing, and page turner. When I first read it last year I could not put it ...